Null and Void

A story from under Master Chief's shadow

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Good bad or ugly?
I like it so far... keep going...
Just stop typing... right now... its hideous...
I think I'll wait a few more sections to judge...
umm... what...?
Format question...?
Keep it in the novel form it is now...
Let us see the AIM form you wrote it in orginally!
Keep the descriptions in novel form, but the dialogue is easier to read in AIM form...
umm.. test drive first?